flytodreams

Please be brutally honest on anything, description, dialogue, setting, style...anything! I just want to improve my writing! _____ Chapter 1 Vranem West “Cia! Cia!” said a voice. Cia yawned and ...

Icy Paths Prologue: Victory and Loss She ran, leaping over corpses, her feet almost always splashing into pools of blood. Her heart was beating hard in her chest, and her ...

Chapter 1Razors of Death Rhen smiled at her best friend while folding a shirt. “I’m going to miss you Lila.” Lila hugged Rhen. “Just promise to write at least once ...

Jesse has been practicing all summer to be the fastest runner in the fifth-grade at his school. But he is beat to that title by a strange new girl, Leslie. ...

Have any of you read The Eye of the World by Robert Jordan? What do you think of it? I'm reading it now, and it's really good so far!

PrologueA Small Victory Zakulas glared into the basin of swirling white mist. “SIRK!” A figure clothed and hooded in navy blue stepped out of the shadows. “Yes, Master?” “What are ...

Hiya everyone! Please be brutally honest with this. Chapter 1Surprise, surprise Liam lay back in his wooden seat, observing all the members of the Honorable Sword and the scrolls that ...