flyinginvisible

I agree with most of what icanbefixed said. Just some repetitive wording in there. Overall, I liked it. Poetry, to me, is almost anything, and this is most definitely a ...

I really liked this. The ancient tribes bit made me stumble, because I couldn't think of ancient tribes with guns, but it fits with the gist of this, and there ...

Walking toward the big cliff's edge, not able to turn back. Then I was plummeting towards death, but he smiled and cut me some slack. I was dropped into a ...

I liked it. I agree with what has been said, you just need to work out some grammatical errors. Putting all of that aside, I wasn't really clear on what ...

I really liked your poem. A little jerky, I thought, but it gives you scenes to see in your head, which is what I love so much about it.

The way you move, Dodging bullets, Hardly escaping a fall. But you're gone, already out the door, the wind flowing behind you as if you were never even there. A ...