flyinginvisible

I think it's pretty hard to be a bad poet. Poetry, to me, is anything you want it to be, pretty much. Anyway. To the point! I'm not sure if ...

I envision myself going outside, rolling around in the barely-there snow, just to do something at all. Eyes open, alone. I imagine myself walking through the hallways of that sea ...

I love this. What inkwell said about the missing 'y' I agree on, but I like the poem just how it is. THIS is why I'm a bad critic. Ah ...

I liked this. Good meaning, it's real. I'd suggest punctuation. Everybody loves grammatically correct poems, right? To start, there was one mis-spelling I caught, a couple M.I.A. commas, and some ...

So....I completely suck at titles. The laundry isn't done, and you're down, clawing for a way to the door so you can go back in time. Back to that smile ...

I love this. This will be a crappy review because I don't really have anything I want to critique here. haha. embrace the now not its shadow. I agree with ...

Figured I'd introduce myself a bit, since I'm liking the site and such. I'm currently a vegeterian. One of my former close friends bet me I couldn't last a week ...

I love this. It can be taken so many ways... I think it'd be awesome if you added punctuation, though. Thanks for the read.

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I can picture it perfectly, which I really love. Kudos to that. I'm not sure I like how it's all pretty much one big run-on, but I don't think you ...

I like it. I'd suggest adding punctuation, though, if you want. I think it adds more to everything. :D That you face is a canvas your? Into mature's maze do ...

Lurking am I, in the dark of my own shadow. Try and find me. I dare you to open up those sewn closed lashes. Smiling, my mouth seems to be ...

Thanks a lot! I made some changes, taking your suggestions. Thank you for the help.

I. Love. This. I don't really know what else to say. I think towards the end, where you say, If a boy is nearby, I hope he don't stare. the ...

I really like this. I sort of agree with MiRaCLeS about the 'too short' thing, but if you feel that it's complete, I don't think there's a need to add ...