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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Killing Me Softly

    You have just taken a cliche and overused idea and made it your own. Applaud yourself. Who would ever think to use smell to portray an idea? Touch and sight ...

    Aug 1, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Rosa never swims with me.

    Though I despise giving pointless reviews, seeing as others have conveyed more helpful advice than I could ever give, I must say I am in love with your title. It ...

    Jul 7, 2009
  • Script » General, General Re: My Truth

    hopefully this is easier to read

    Jun 6, 2009
  • Script » General, General Re: My Truth

    Thank you! I'll work on trying to clear up a few things. I really appreciate the response (:

    Jun 2, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Untitled

    Thanks for the info about limericks. Obviously, I don't pay attention to terminology; I just write, haha. I really appreciate everything that you said, and I'm definitely going to take ...

    May 25, 2009


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