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  • Other Re: If you're talking to the moon

    You lost me at “leopard-spots”. I was relishing in the airy skim over your first few lines- candid and trenchant and absurd in a way that made me dimple, when ...

    Aug 20, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Thoughts of a Call-Girl

    My very first impression was simply: “This is Not How a Call Girl Feels”. How could you possibly know? How could you ever hope to portray genuine insight from one ...

    Jun 12, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Bear, Swan, 1984

    My first impression was simply: “Even though I did not like it, it was still an exemplary piece of writing.” Challenging prose is often unsympathetic to popular opinion, which is ...

    Jun 9, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Mislaid

    Really Old Mislaid The first that fled Fled with poise As it always did Floating serenely Out of my house Scarcely uttering a noise Believing not That it was dead ...

    May 24, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: A Pillar of Salt

    I am deeply fascinated by the personal vignette- a finite, transient moment in time compressed and then sustained for an audience. A moment or collection of moments that are individually ...

    May 24, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Skipping Sunday

    Shut up Seraphim No one cares What you have to say On a rush On a rage On a whim Take a snooze and stay that way Your tongue forks ...

    May 20, 2011


Forget ragebaiting. What about happybaiting. Purposely mentioning things that my friends like to make them happy and joyous. What about that, huh
— GengarTheGhost