fireheartedkaratepup

Whatever Rosey said. I'm cool with that. She gives good reviews and good advice. *nods* Juuuuust kidding. I do agree with her, though. The concept is very interesting, but the ...

Heyo! The former karatepup here to review. First, thank you very much for breaking up your piece. It's great that you've noticed something about the community, and acted accordingly--not everyone ...

First things first--you need to break up your story. As of now, there are no new paragraphs in your story. At all. I can understand that--I used to hate having ...

Yo! If I could take all your pain If I could make you stay If I could wash away your vain Then I would Wait, vain? what? How do you ...

Based on a Psalm? Instant love. I've been reading the Bible lately, noticing that much of it is poetry. Not just the Psalms and proverbs, but books like Ecclesiastes, Hosea, ...

XD at matthew. Interesting.....was this one of those short response to a movie assignments? If so, I think you did well. Otherwise, I don't see the point of such a ...

D'awwwwwwwwwwwwww. This is so true. I say take a to-go box back to the hungry man! (If you can find him. :() I like rambly, so maybe I'm not the ...

..................why do you think this is awful? Seriously, why? There's no reason to think that. Maybe it's a bit fragment-ish, but that can be written off as a stylistic thing. ...

Iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!! The detached, uninterested prodigy isn't new, but.... it's still interesting, to me. I can see anime influences here, un

Isshhhyyyy, I loooove youuuuuuuu....... I can tell without even looking that this is good. (.....God tells me? O.o) Unfortunately, I'm short on time......... I might come back and read this ...

D: Qara doesn't seem to get many reviews...... maybe it's just that I get her before most others? I hope so. And I guess it's good that people are going ...

RAZZY WHY ARE YOU REPLYING IN THREAD D: ....sooowwwyyy. I dearly loves the pwetty wittle pm reply button. Oi do. Oi dearly lurves eet. *cough* Anyway. I'm not really sure ...

I saw that this was a story and almost clicked away-- I like reviewing poems and pictures because they're easy--not as much to read, so you can spend more time ...

Ethics aside, this is beautiful. I'm drained right now, so I'll just leave it at that. I liked it. I love the love in you. Don't hide it. And I ...

So, I read the first stanza, then started reading the second one. Suddenly, I realized what it was you were saying, reread, and got chills. It's beautiful, dear. By the ...