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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Process of Clarity

    Hey I'll be your reviewer for today! One word: Wow. That was really amazing! I loved the emotion and the feeling you put into it. I could feel the character's ...

    Aug 23, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: dark carneva

    Well hello there! I'll be your reviewer for today! Okay, so I thought this was good, but not great. You should make the punctuation and capitilizing better and really read ...

    Aug 23, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Piano Playing Days

    Hey I'll be your reviewer for today! I really liked this, I could picture it clearly, and since I have a friend just like the man you described in this ...

    Aug 23, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Summer Nights

    Hey! I'll be your reviewer for today! I really liked this, I've never been to South Carolina, but the way you described it I could see it perfectly. You ask ...

    Aug 23, 2010
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Twilight War (16+ for violence)

    Hi! I'll be your reviewer for today! The darkness was a cruel master. It surrounded her on every side with closed doors and avenues of tumbling memory. The darkness held ...

    Jan 1, 2010


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