fireflight14

the poem goes well, buh there is no flow, and i din't understand much, to tell u the truth! try another 1,this tym it'll b ryt! :D

hey, i'm no artist,but your doctor looks, well.......good. I guess you can draw a lot better,but this one can only be rated good.:/

i really know how u feel! its sad indeed.... well really well expressed, even if u din't hav tym!:p

wow!!! jus so spellbound to say anything! its so beautiful....a real lover's state! i guess rubber duck had already stated ur mistakes..... really well writen. :D

The "look at the sky with seem", I actually meant 2 say that, when i look at the sky, i feel sad. And then the poem continues.... thanx nyways...:D

wow!! all u guys write poems???? nyc 2 meet u all..:D i'm new 2 tis site, so could u guys plz help me out on gaining points?? as i already ...

hey welcome 2 YWS.

Has the world come down on me? As I look at the sky with seem. And now I write my words earnestly. Each time my heart pounds, I sit in ...

Walking on the serene streets, I suddenly heard the screaming of the birds, The wind blowing cold, Frightened and scared stands the old. I heard a guttural boom, And a ...