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  • Narrative Poetry Re: the day, when back was in

    there once was a mongolian barbecue where two old ladies sat in their rocking chairs to drink steam tea every afternoon, it was predictable and the townspeople set their clocks ...

    May 12, 2005
  • Welcome Mat Re: glbtq

    woot. i have returned. re tur ned. calfornia rocks my socks. iguessiamanunderwaterthing rocks my world. for me, being a lesbian is a huge part of how i identify myself, and ...

    May 12, 2005
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: Dark Matter

    other universes, are, i forgot to mention, theoretical. our universe is expanding at the speed of light - you all know this. but expaning implies into SOMETHING, whether that something ...

    May 10, 2005
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: Dark Matter

    i think dark matter isnt entirely dark matter. that is to say, for instance, reach a bucket into the ocean. there's oxygen. and hydrogen. and salt. and little microscopic organisms. ...

    May 10, 2005
  • Lyrics Re: hand in hand - a graduation song

    this is the first end of many though it's the last one here and as we learn to say a parting prayer we must return to the days when we ...

    May 8, 2005
  • Lyrics Re: Broken up inside

    Im so through Im so done is really nice. when you have really long phrasing, these things stand out more so you dont have to be overly eloquent about them.

    May 8, 2005
  • Lyrics Re: Shes giving up

    i dig it. what's nice about this is that there's an intrinsic rhythm in the lyrics that most songs loose when you cant actually hear the music. i also really ...

    May 8, 2005
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: blue girl

    the non-tabbing-formatting-lackofoption is killer in this. regardless. thanks for reading :) If my blue-colored girlfriend told me today that you had died, I would paint my nails red for your ...

    May 3, 2005
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: hitherto untitled (apologies for that)

    Your horizon-curve smiling cheeks fill with the pink dashes on the front of a postcard. (Weather's here, wish you were beatiful.) The city there looks full of anticipation, the lighted ...

    Apr 26, 2005
  • Lyric Poetry Re: running along the train-tracks (mature language)

    Today is a day for yesterday's music and beat; for tasting my own lips where my heart pounded after you kissed them, back when you kissed them. It's a train-track ...

    Apr 6, 2005
  • General Articles Re: Just the Three of Us

    He was. More importantly, he had a bat. best lines of the whole piece. right there.

    Apr 5, 2005
  • Lyric Poetry Re: twelve

    have you read "god of small things" by arundhati roy? she does the stringingwordstogetherthing. it won the booker prize. very good text if you have not yet picked it up. ...

    Apr 5, 2005
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The Curse of Mortality

    a lot of people already said everything else. except that the repetition was enjoyable. not THE GREATEST THING I HAVE EVER READ, but enjoyable.

    Apr 5, 2005
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: He. (13+ language)

    the final "he" stands out way too much. i really like the way you've broken the rest of it up. he / numbs, he /holds, etc. however, this last "he" ...

    Apr 5, 2005
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Hourglass

    perhaps i'm just a lovestruck shmuck, but i want to know more about liberty. hehe. battleground attractions - dangerous in military times. i want to know why she is at ...

    Apr 3, 2005


You're wrong about humanity. They are your greatest creation because they're better than you are. Sure, they're weak, and they cheat and steal and destroy and disappoint, but they also give and create, and they sing and dance and love. Above all, they never give up.
— Metatron