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Thank you for your reviews! I haven't seen Quantico and I haven't read Lost Hero, so the rest of my story shouldn't be too similar to them, I hope. I ...

thanks! I will definately put some more emotion in that first part!

Thanks so much for the reviews! They're quite helpful and I enjoy reading them, they make me giggle, especially when you said Alexis seems masochistic... It makes me wonder xD

Something interesting: I'm Australian and I got really confused when you said "Homely=ugly" so I googled it - apparently the British/Australian definition of homely is cosy like someone's home, and ...

Thanks for another great review! I can't believe I didn't know that's what sauntering meant! The word had a lot of harsh sounding letters in it, so I always imagined ...

Don't feel horrible, "planned" is not the operative word. My main problem is that I don't plan things out at all xD

Thanks for the review! I'll take all that on-board, and yes there were a couple of typos that you pointed out. As for the tiles; it really depends on the ...

Thank you, so very much. I've been working in this novels for a couple of years and at first it was very succinct and to the point, Then I kinda ...

Thank you for yet another brilliantly detailed and helpful review! It's really rare for people to be completely right about everything they say in reviews, but you are, so thank ...

Thanks for the review! I found it very useful and I will implement your suggestions ASAP. Do you think you could do some of the other chapters too?

Thank you! Don't apologize for being blunt - I needed it. I agree this was not one of my best chapters, I will fix it up ASAP. Definitely needs more ...

Thanks for the review :) I agree it is quite long, and I see now that the start of it isn't great. The part at the start with running from ...

Hi! Two years later I've finally posted the first chapter and the rest of the novel will shortly follow. Here it is if you want to read it!

Hi! Two years later I've finally posted the first chapter and the rest of the novel will shortly follow. Here it is if you want to read it!

Hi! Two years later I've finally posted the first chapter and the rest of the novel will shortly follow. Here it is if you want to read it!