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this was pretty beautiful, but i have a problem with the consistency of the rhyme. in some stanzas the second line rhymes with the last, in others they don't. that ...

haha i liked it! He raced over to his trunk, opened it and took out a folded piece of parchment. He didn’t bother to clean up the mess that he ...

WHOA!!! that was awesome!!! you have some real talent. if you, like, record yourself singing this and put it on youtube or something, send me the link so i can ...

hi! i liked it, i just had one problem... i can't say i particularly liked the repitition of "i miss you, i need you" and then you completely broke the ...

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Hi! could you please review the first chapter of my novel, Lone Wolf? thanks in advance! ps. if you have the time, it would be great if you could do ...

Hi! could you please review the first chapter of my novel, Lone Wolf? thanks in advance! ps. if you have the time, it would be great if you could do ...

wow. truly an amazing story. top marks :D because the names Ruth and Rosa both begin with R i got a little confused at the start especially in parts like ...

awww i love this! it's so sweet and true!! my favourite bit is... And when that bastard breaks your heart I promise to be there With three boxes of tissues, ...

hey this was really good and had nice flow and rhythm Scrapes, cut, burns and bruise. it goes plural, single, plural, single, and i don't really like it. i think ...

Hi! could you please do a general review on my novel, Lone Wolf? thanks in advance!

hi wow i think the first poem was the best, the second was ok. i had to read it twice to realize it was talking about actually swinging, like at ...

hi thanks for the reveiw it was really helpful and i tried to fix up the stuff you pointed out could you please reveiw the next chapter? -fighta

Hi!!! could you please reveiw the first chapter of my novel, Lone Wolf? it's kinda about love but has some action too... -fighta