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Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks “Welcome Ana Penrova. I am Lady Salcata.” “Hello.” I think that you should really add some ...

Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks Getting jobs done from dusting to running the world. "done from dusting" what does that mean? ...

Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks I hop out of bed quickly, but run my head into the wardrobe. By run my ...

Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks As we walk in we split up me going upstairs, and him remaining on the main ...

Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks The only problem I had with the story was that the first lot of dialogue “But ...

Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks Okay so I don't really have any nit-picks for this chapter. I just have observation to ...

Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks Then I blacked out. This seems a bit sudden. Doesn't she feel a a throb in ...

Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks “He’s dead, I know he is,” I muttered, tears springing to my eyes. I feel that ...

Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks “Eric! How was vacation?” His train had been running late so I have been sitting at ...

Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks A beam of moonlight sliced through the sky like a silver spear I just want to ...

Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks I was only a year older than Anne is now when she left us. this sentence ...

Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks Okay so the first thing I noticed was the use of rhymes. Now while they help ...

Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks “Just...don’t do it again. You know we can’t afford it.” So this is probably just me, ...

Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Grammar and Punctuation “Now how about we get ourself a camp "ourself" is two words. Overall thoughts ...

Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks Ivory put an arm around Sparrow's shoulders and pulled her in. in the context of the ...