fatimachan

Ch.1 Breakfast “Get out the shower! Time’s up!” Koga banged on the bathroom door. “Hold up! I gotta wash the shampoo outa my hair! Just use one of the other ...

wow wow wow, thank you all for the help! so far YWS seems like a really helpful place for ameture writers to get all the advice and help they need. ...

I agree with el Arma Escrita, the number of characters at the very beginning is overwhelming and somewhat confusing. I see that you wanted us to know a little about ...

wow. I love how you added the surprise element at the end. I really wasn't expecting him to be the one that caused her to be in that state. "A ...

Oh, wow, Danny sounds really handsome. haha. I love your humor its so funny. Favorite part: "I'm looking outside my window at the moment and I can see Mrs.Morris's devil ...

Dreamin’ Bounty hunter since 12 years old I can’t remember the last time I felt my right hip with out a pistol The cold hard but of my pistol against ...

wooooow! This piece is amazing, the words you use to describe are so descriptive. The poem flows, there is not one break! It is nice to see how you've grown ...

i love the hook of this poem, "look what you made me do" its so cute and catchy. Explains the exact feelings of anyone who's had a crush! Puerto Rican! ...

The theme reminds me of books i've read. With the main character confused at whats going on. saddened by reality. confused by the fake smiles and laughter. I noticed one ...

Hey What's Up everyone, I just created an account 2 minutes ago because my best friend Amira15 told me about it! So yeah anyway I'm 16 years old and really ...