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Re: Deadly Party Part 1: Introductions
[pre] It was 3:23 A.M., and my brother was as sweaty as a fat country sheriff. The wrangling went bad that night, and I dealt with the brunt of it. ...
Mar 5, 2008 -
Re: Knights of Acid
Hey, thanks for all the advice. I really do appreciate it. I've been editing the story a lot lately, eventually I'll post the final.
Aug 23, 2007 -
Re: Knights of Acid
All I can say is that what i wrote in those novel/poem is what I was thinking at the time. Once again, each part of it has a different meaning. ...
Aug 21, 2007 -
Re: Knights of Acid
Those crazy letters, great gaps, and other things that just don't make sense in this story are placed there as a meaning for certain things. Certain things include my emotions ...
Aug 21, 2007 -
Re: Knights of Acid
Before you read any of this, I'd like you to consider reading the attached file first. It's the poem in it's complete original format. I've think I've given people the ...
Aug 16, 2007 -
Re: Keyboards
moldy lemons in the hallway, white magnolias pouring down the ceiling wall Clicking keyboards , quarters on the floor, white hallway, noise noise, my emotions pour through my teeth white ...
Mar 24, 2006 -
Re: Head Hunter
If the sign is just a whore sign Well it makes sense to me I see yards of yarn come undone Cars exploding right before me Were they trucks or ...
Mar 23, 2006 -
Re: Another Deranged Love Song
shoudn't this be in the lyrics section? ahh well. it's good, but i had a little trouble flowing with it... Don't 'flow' with it! Sing with it! Aha. :lol: and ...
Mar 17, 2006 -
Re: Another Deranged Love Song
Some people are so strange Some people are just derange But when I look at you I see right through me too So won't you take my hand? Or are ...
Mar 16, 2006 -
Re: Another Deranged Love Song
Some people are so strange Some people are just derange But when I look at you I see right through me too So won't you take my hand? Or are ...
Mar 16, 2006
