fantasy-freak

...____ @(^_^)@ ..~ ..(_) (_) GO BARTY!!!!!!!! WOOOOOO MONKEYS!!!!!!!!! vote monkeys cuz we dont spit fire when we're mad

i love it. especially cuz i love the ocean :D . is there more to it? if there isn't i suggest making it longer. :wink:

I love the whole moon thing...but, yeah i agree it's a little short. :idea: I suggest adding something like, A silver sphere, Reminding me of home, A beauty in the ...

Thanks for the critisism. I tend to describe a lot, I didn't know you can over describe things. Makes you think. All I was trying to do was to get ...

Jeez people are picky!!! Here is my REVISED work: Salina stepped across the soft grass to the foster homes’ playground. Her black hair, set in pigtails down to her knees, ...

(I'm back and ready to continue from where i left off) Continuing from: Then they came upon an fork in the path one was marked and the other was unmarked. ...

COOL I HAVE REPLIES!!!!!!!!! thanks for the comments and constructive critisim. as for the spots behind your eyes thing i never even thought of it that way :wink: and if ...

That is so awsome! I'm totaly speechless :!: (trust me many have tried to do this and failed [usually you either can't get me to shut up or speak up ...

This is really cool! It remindes me of my days in Kindergarden when hide and seek was the game to play. Everybody couldn't resist peeking to see if someone was ...

I close my eyes to see, To put a little extra, Into the ordinary, To see a spark of fariy dust, On my Spanish test, Or to see dragons in ...

It' a work in progress but I hope you like it! :) Salina stepped across the soft grass to the foster homes’ playground. Her black hair, set in pigtails down ...