fanatic_dadaism

I loved the ending of Grapes of Wrath, I mean most of the poeple i know said it ruined the book because of the cliched symbolism, but i felt the ...

I acctually liked the first two stanza i think they help to set up the ending. Your wording seemed kind of shaky in places but i really dont see a ...

I disagree with the last comment or some of it at least, except like the rating and the capital "I". I think the way you wrote it with the dash-outs ...

i agree with the above but it seems easy to work with, the wording just needs to be rearranged alittle. Ane possibly a little more emotion on your part. Not ...

I loved this, to be perfectly honest and not sound like i'm just like um how would you say....just saying good things to be nice? maybe. but i really do ...

I agree with most of the above, and I think it has a okay sense of emotion but a different wording or more description of the girl might add more ...