fallenoutofgrace

This was brilliant. I felt your emotion pouring out through every line you wrote. Love.. Love your diction and the way you just in general did this whole poem was ...

My reaction to your poem is simple. Amazing. I love how you break apart the stanza's to what I am believing to help the reader see your scattered thoughts an ...

Good morrow, Rainbow! :3 First off like the others just a few places where a comma should be. But other than that your good there. What I like about your ...