fallenbird

Thank you for your review! The ending part about how the child had been taught a lesson was that the child had been shunned really for expressing any negative emotions ...

Thank you for the review, interpretation was spot on! :)

Thanks so much for your review, I'm glad you enjoyed my poem :)

I'm so glad you enjoyed my poem and your interpretation is completely spot on, thanks for your review!

Glad you enjoyed, and you're right I'll swap my 'buts' for something better :)

Thanks so much for your review! You're right about the punctuation I tried to use it in a minimal amount so that its main affect would be how the poem ...