fallenangel

He strode through the mist towards the shadows of the gloomy trees; but he hesitated when he reached an entrance into the lonesome and dreary forest. It was such a ...

I had kind of a hard time of figuring out what was going on. I really think this has potential though, perhaps it's a little too personal. It could use ...

This is so cute! Oh my heck I love it. I could really see what was going on in the story, it has great potential. Please keep writing! Great job.

Thanks for the advice, obviously it needs some work! I know that it was confusing, and I apologize but once again; this was simply an exert. I left out a ...

I was in the darkness again. No light glimpsed through the trees. It was nighttime. I could hear the faint chirp of a cricket, and the cool night air sang ...

I like the ideas you've got going here, you've definitely got a start. I would suggest organizing it a little bit, it's kind of hard to understand exactly what's going ...

[pre]I trudged through the darkness uncertainly. Desperate. Searching. Panic began to try to take me, and I fought to keep its persistent grasp away when it sensed my struggle. I ...

Hi, my name is Mary I'm sixteen almost seventeen. I play the violin and piano, I also adore soccer. Writing has become a distinct passion in my life lately and ...