fairygirl

Hiya! Ok, great job! this was really an eye catcher! I had fun reading it and I'm excited for the next chapter. 1) i hate myself for saying this, since ...

This was really good! I'm excited for the next chapter. Great job on Brandon: his quick recognition was a little surpising, as was the narrators anger. I'm sure theres a ...

I agree with mhmmcolleenxO. It took me a second to realize that he was only 11 years old. But other than that, this really hit home. It was great. I ...

This is good! You pulled it off extremly well, but I'm a little confused. 1)Maybe if your included the narrators name a little more often-I'm not sure what it is. ...

Prologue: My name is Keira Farren. I am 18 years old and treated like a toddler by my parents. They act like I can't take care of myself and I ...

Thornfox: I've read this,over on goodreads. and if you remember, I told you to hurry up and get the next chapter!!! I love it, but was wondering: 1)what does Fox ...

Well done. Very well done. But I feel a little confused. Maybe because it's only the beginning. What did Ford do? Why is Sonora so upset? who the w is ...

I didn't know you started short stories in the middle!!! golly, thats probably why I have too many ideas... I'm writing alot of stories personally. THe one I'm really getting ...

I'm writing TOO MUCH!!! gagh, I need to finish at least ONE of my thousand ideas...

Hiya! I'm completely lost and haveing a great time!!! :P I once read a qoute about 'you have to be lost if you ever want to find something exciting' or ...