fairygirl

Wow, great job!! This was excellant! and your details were fabulous! this is a fun read and it keeps me guessing!! This sounds like an adventure as well as a ...

Wow, good job! This was a suspenseful read! I enjoyed it very much. just a few little pointers: again, details. When they crashed, was there a sickening knot in her ...

The tall man paced back and forth in anger. How could all of his spies fail so miserably?!He was the most powerful man in all of Mac, but it seemed ...

CHAPTER ONE:Back in Hell... Don't you ever wish time could stop? Here I was again. That stupid- sorry, supercilious sidewalk next to the sign saying that it was a bus ...

This was...interesting. Unfortunetly, it wasn't very much fun to read. It was hard to understand, a little confusing, and boring. I felt no attachment towards the writing and the characters ...

Oh man, I REALLY REALLY REALLY want to read those books!!! but I can't find them anywhere!!! I hear they are so good! I think one of my favorite authors ...

Hiya Buddy!! I've only been on for one day, and I am really liking it here. everybody is really friendly and helpful. it's a fun site!! So what kind of ...

They will. Give it time! :P Thanks for askin' my questions-- just be sure to make sure the readers will know that without having to be told! :D

fallenangel, thank you for suggesting this! I love it. (of course, you HAD to add Beauty and the Best...;D) This was really cute and fun to read. The humor and ...

you are sooo lucky to be tall! I'm a little shorty, but I cover up by saying 'I'm not short, I'm fun size, silly!' but that doesn't change the fact, ...

Heya Day Dreamer! I'm brand new on this site too, but I'm haveing so much fun! You're from England? I've never met a person from England, since I'm over in ...

This was really fun to read! Your characters were great and their relationship is really sweet. But there were places where I was just a little confused: 1)Why are they ...

Great job! I had a fun time reading what you had written. I'm no grammatical genius, thus, I'm not going to say anything about mistakes, mainly because I didn't see ...

This was great! I'm excited to see what happens next. I wonder what really happened in the alley way, and who it was that hurt her. I'm glad Jared found ...

To put it short, I loved it! This was really good, and the peom made my heart clench and unclench for a bit. I'm not going to say something like ...