fairygirl

Wow, cool story! You've got a great idea here, and I like it alot. THere are just a few little things I want to point out: 1) you kind of ...

Hmm, pretty cool. Soemtimes just looking through other peoples eyes gives you a taste of whats happening to them. Cool, thoughtful poem. I really liked it! :) keep going. I'm ...

Man, this makes me miss summer so much. It's very sweet and I needed it! Where I'm at theres either snow or gray clouds or both. We got a blue ...

This is really cute! You did a great job speakerskat! It's innocent and sweet. Those lucky birds. I wish I could fly. :) peace ~*~fairygirl~*~

Haha these are way cool! :) ~*~fairygirl~*~

Awh, SAD!!! you did a very good job and I really like it. It's very discriptive, even though slightly depressing. No one wants an empty Christmas. I'm like that with ...

CHAPTER ONE My world was crumbling to pieces with every box that came out of the moving van. I had spent the past couple hours wondering if moving away was ...

ooohh!! Now this is cool! I like it alot!!! Only a couple of flys in my ointment: 1) details, please! What does Geoffery look like? Hair color, eye color, height, ...

Whoa. This is pretty cool--in a deep dark depressing way. You've got an awesome talent here, really! I could never manage to write anything as discriptive as this. You protrayed ...

Hmmm, Sounds interesting. There are just little things that could be fixed but I'm TERRIBLE at grammer. We're writers. That's what spell check is for, right? Ok, so I LOVE ...

Oh my gosh. WOW. I want to read it again and again and again!! This was FANTASTIC!! I mean, I've read short stories and hundreds of books but this REALLY ...

Wow great job!! This was a fun read! I dn't have anything to really crituiqe sinc eyou did such a good job!! Keep it up, I'm excited to see what ...

Just a couple questions: 1)Why does Justin need a wheelchair? 2)they're going to collegae, so how old does that make them? (i'm a dork for not knowing, but hey! maybe ...

Even the tallest Mountains crumble Beneath the travelers feet even the largest rivers tumble Into the ocean deep Even winter melts to spring When you've given up your hope The ...

Very suspenseful, great job on the details! I'm glad Luke is still alive! This is a fun and exciting read and Luke is definately somekind of hero. I only wish ...