fairygirl

Wowza! Intesne, cool poem, but sad at the same time. Keep at it, I'll be looking for more of your stuff!! Peace! ~*~fairygirl~*~

... Lol!!!! XD funny, you should add more about the ball and stuff. with your humor, I'll laugh all through it! :P Keep writing, no matter what!! Peace! ~*~fairygirl~*~

Prologue "It’s heavily sedated sir. And disarmed.” “You’re positive?” “Yes sir.” The thing they were talking about was lying on a cold metal table, its eyes closed. The skin above ...

Ahhh, that is soooooo sad! and sweet too. Bitter sweet. I am most definately NOT going to even try to point out and gramatical errors, if there are any. I ...

Cute and honest! Keep writing, I like it! peace ~*~fairygirl~*~

cool. I'm over here wondering how this is gonna turn out. Keep at it! !) add a little more detail on the human characters (unless you plan on having them ...

ohhh, eerie!!!!! cool story, I like it! I'll be reading more! ( THANK YOU. i swear, if he started to sparkle or somdthing, I might've died on the spot. but, ...

Awh, cute! It sounds just like my cousins! Great job! :) "She won't even eat your homemade cookie dough" lol, she's insane! i love cookie dough! (my cooking of the ...

It feels like its moving too fast with less consquences. Everybody has an enemy, unless this land she's in gets along perfectly. The end battle was great but it's a ...

Wow great job. The history is sad! :( Especially since she had done nothing wrong. The story is coming along fantastically. I'll keep reading, definately. Keep at it. Maybe if ...

Howdy! Thanks so much for the comments. I don't know how I always screw up those dumb tenses. My brain just goes to fast and my fingers stumble for the ...

OMG!!!! LOL!!!!! AMY!!!! WOW!! I can't stop laughing! you go girl!!! I LOVE this story, please, please, please, keep writing! PM me ASAP! Eh, once again, no suggestions. If you're ...

Sheesh, not much to say. I doubt you have any grammatical errors, and even if you do, I will not be pointing them out, thank you very much. I believe ...

Chapter Two “June, did you sleep here last night?” a taunting voice called. I poked my head out of the sleeping bag and squinted my eyes before hoarsely saying: “No, ...

Ah cute! I really like it!I can totally imagine reading that to my younger cousins and they'd love it! great job and keep it up! peace ~*~fairygirl~*~