fairy_at_heart

A comfort in the dead of night. Even when the wind whips at the windows, and the dark begins to creep into your bed room all you have to do ...

I really enjoyed the "Uglies" series. It is by Scott Westerfield. He does a really good job at expressing light romance and lots of action. He was able to mix ...

Ok, i have 2 things to say to you. First your poem is really depressing. why would you want to write about trying to kill yourself. Also, i dont think ...

OK, just a few things to criticise. First of all... The sun beds down beneath I don't exactly understand what you are trying to say here. what do you mean ...

The "its complicated" rising from the crash. Ok, i didnt really understand this part. What do you mean by "The "its complicated""? If you find another way to get your ...

Cool! Thanks for the advice! does anyone else have any advice?

What does it matter If the day’s long gone What does it matter If the night’s so forlorn I think that you should try to find a word that rhyms ...

wow! that was really good!

What goes through her mind, when she escapes into the shadows, of this dark alley? Evil wraps its arm around her. It leads her into sin, horror, and doubt. When ...

Chemical! (as in "My Chemical Romance")

The small waves brush against the dock. The seagulls slowly drift off , leaving me in stunning silence. The sun sinks into the horizon, leaving a splash of colors smeared ...

Simba- I LOVED it! The only thing i have to say about it is that the right paw (the one in the air) Looks a little oddly shaped. Otherwise it's ...

I thought it was fairly good. But the puncuation kind of distracted me. A poem full of questions is never a great idea. It is ok to have a question ...

I think that it is a really good idea, but i am not a fan of that sketchy look. I like solid black lines and full coloring. But if you ...

Wow! This drawing is beautiful! The shading is perfect, the dark lines give your picture a hint of intenseness (i don't think that is a word), and the steel eyes ...