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  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Narrative Re: Lust (The First Circle)

    Helllooo, Hannah here! Lets jump in, yay! 1.) "Save me? You've condemned me already! YOU MURDERED MY FAMILY." I said, sitting up to scream the last part in his face ...

    Jan 24, 2016
  • Short Story » Realistic, Other Re: Carry on my wayward son

    Hannah here! :) Helloo! 1.) Woah, hey! "His legs were dangling and kicking as Thomas struggled to keep his breath steady while squirming around trying to get buckled correctly in ...

    Jan 22, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Cat fight!

    Heyo, there! Alright, your story is nice. I've never read one like it. Thanks for the experience. :P 1.) The start is very nice. I like the action - as ...

    Jan 21, 2016
  • Short Story » Humor, Romantic Re: Slow Dancing, Slow Crashing

    Hello, there! This is a well-written story, and it leaves people with a good cliffhanger. *Sigh* A few pointers - Yay! 1.) You seem to /tell/ the reads things rather ...

    Jan 21, 2016


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