Young Writers Society

Hey there :33 I really like this poem...I feel like taking a walk in light rain with someone now :) It's beautiful. Acrostic poems are always fun to write and ...

I Loved this!!!! Awesome work! There were some grammar errors but other than that, well done! So enjoyed reading this... :D Gosh, I hope this doesn't sound rude. LiesOnLies, clearly ...

Awww...I really liked this! Are you sure this was your first try? I mean, it's preeeetty good! :) More than depressing, I felt it was more dejection, desolation, and remorse. ...

Wow. I'm just happy I'm reviewing this in the middle of the day. If I had read this poem during the night, I would have tears pouring down my face ...

I really like this! I'm going through writing block right now actually! :) This line really touched me: This feeling just comes and goes like it does not care about ...

I agree with Formslipper I think you just took my innocence. I'm kind of scared to comment now.. :) That gave me the chills; every single sentence. I loved reading ...

Nice job! I loved the message this poem sent about LGBT! It had a good voice that sounded almost powerful and gave me chills at times. There were a few ...

Oh my gosh! I love this! I loved the diction, the imagery. and the overall style of it! I think more people should read this... Loved the descriptions! I was ...

I actually really liked this poem, contrary to what others might say. Sure, some words could have been replaced by others, but this is your interpretation, no? It's quite simple, ...

Haha, I just came across this. This is real cute! I love it! :) November 14 is my little sister's birthday! What a coincidence...two very wonderful things on this day ...

Wow. This poem was so beautiful. The words were very descriptive; I could see what was happening in the poem in my head( like a mental video!) There were a ...

I love this poem! It is really good! I went to Catholic school for about 7 years and it was the worst experience of my life. I am Atheist and ...