evanrith

first thing you might notice in this poem is grammar and a few other things it all has a point. My inner editor was killed on a sun shiny day ...

so this was very diffrent from what i expected on opening it. This was a very creative look at mustaches and was new. i loved the whole thing as it ...

Actully the last two people to state what this about were both right. this is about showing ones true self through words and writing and about the emotional hurt one ...

Banned for using the word "Epic"

so for a first poem this is really great it shows pure undilted emotion but it lacks the eloqience of experience which isnt nessicarily a bad thing. the only though ...

This poem isnt really missing anything at all. it had a solid meaning behind it that isnt obscure or doesnt need alot of thought to nessicarily understand it. as for ...

We say nothing but we say it loud, going through life ignorant and proud. that burnt in smile leaving my face, because of a child's intelligence and grace, to be ...

This is to the people that call any piece of art pointless- It's okay that not everyone is an artist, but to denounce that something "has no point" would be ...

I liked the refrences you used and the symbolism as well and its flow for me was just the right pace but i would have to hear it out loud ...

I can not cry it would seem, unless along the paper stream. Where words are the fish that go with its flow. Where learning and fun, are the same, we ...

Hey anti i liked the story really well. It kept me intrested and actullyhelped out a little bit it shoved me down if you get at all what i mean ...

All you people sitting up high, wondering what poor person to make cry. I give you a goal for this life, to try to understand our strife. It can't hurt ...

tired no chance of sleep wired so that I cant weep confused the words tumbling in my head anger this life is full of dread hope that I can see ...

so this is my first time commenting on a poem of yours. so in turn id like to say i have no idea grammer or style wise but it was ...

so typical not alone ahha