evanrith

So I am not an outlaw. I loved your essay and the idea behind your questions is a very well put one indeed. So like i said im not an ...

okay so I have some explaining to do. This is a new type of poem the title is what i gave it because that is what this new style is ...

I never touch grammar or style. That being said, wow! This was trully great a masterpiece and i mean that with all my heart the story told was amazing and ...

I have remembered to half forget, That saying that so loud leaves one a target. For yelling, and hitting, or simply ones bidding, To catch you off guard while you're ...

Okay so the fourth grade lesson tutor was kinda low and i know how to write and sue grammar and how to make things flow. i just don't its my ...

so let me first state that this was amazing. second that i do not crit. grammar or style only message. I would try to give you an answer as they ...

I have a diffrent veiw on crits. than other people i dont touch the style or the grammar I only touch the message. Okay for one this fit close to ...

The darkness came, passed, and went away stealing not a second today I held on to every single last drop of light, it hurt, but I didnt stop. People always ...

om not going to comment on grammar i never do. My what a unique take on an ordinary object. I didnt expect that to be the ending and it was ...

okay so this poem is well written with proper grammar and what not right? it is and june corrected the grammar that wasn't right. right?and I'm adverse to critizising style ...

The darkness came, passed and went away stealing not second of my light today. I held onto every last drop forcing the bubble not to disappear or pop People told ...

My cage is gone, I’m finally free To once and forever just be me. I laugh not cry under my mast, and the people say he’s lost it at last ...

So this style is not what i expected but i liked it very much. i completly understood what was going on as should most people who have had a tough ...

I don't really like this poem. remeber that that is also just one person's opinion. the repition in this poem is probably what threw me off along with the jagged ...

So this is mostly my work but i did have someone help me with editing and re-wording. A couple of the lines in this are Springrains or June and actully ...