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Since legen of zelde already got nominated and yes i have to say it's a great game. Also the earthbound series which is anouther great game with a good story ...

Actully i thought the structure in this piece was great. You have to understand this was all leading up to the conclusion about forgetting how to dream and that basically ...

here nutty you said to post it here it's my story.

Prologue “Yes, I’m coming to the door,” Kira called down the stairs, “I said that like fifteen times already.” She was getting dressed to go trick-or-treating and hang out with ...

'm looking for a nuetral name for a charecter. A female charecter it has to be strong but also a indesicive name.Also I want it to sound kind of odd. ...

I thought that this piece was awesome. A hint it could easily be read from the bottom up to change, no well not change but to recreate the meaning while ...

Conceit pulled of eloquently. Wow. I never thought I would see something like that. I don't touch grammer or style only the message behind a poem and clearly the message ...

Nice concept. Well written and very heart felt. The only problem I have with this is how you organized it. I'm not sure that this was the right way to ...

Dating something isn't always a bad thing 1984 was dated and it's still around today. So this was a very well done piece of writing you showed us instead of ...

A thought occurred I must kill time but no suitable weapon ever comes to mind I tried the hammer and the hours rung out I tried the sword and the ...

this is a very good poem. I'm glad you took the repition out. this poem was great in the fact that almost everyone does remember feeling like that at one ...

the last reply was supoosed to say showing us a story not telling us in the last sentence

This was well written and all which is great but I also think I see the reason you're teacher gave you a low grade. I'm betting the teacher said this ...

Well there could be such a thing as a good bye to writting I just hope it's a myth.This poem was wonderfully funny and witty(witty is an odd word) it ...

Light and dark Black and white Time and space The joy of sorrow The Clapping hand Rejoicing times Never in sand So I see People in love The world above