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I love this. Possibly because I love the dark, but I love this. The only thing I can suggest is deepening the descriptions and expanding the story slightly, but the ...

Okay, this is actually the sixth of a set of 22 linked stories, and the other 21 will probably appear given time. Rom is dead, Jake is telling this story ...

Firstly, me being me, I must hug you. So *hug* Okay. Story wise, this is brilliant. The attention given to detail in this is incredible, and as always, its best ...

I'm new, I suppose obviously. My name comes from Brideshead Revisited, a novel I absolutely adore. I write in a variety of styles, although I tend towards the dark side ...

In general, I like this story. The prose is fairly smooth, the ideas solid. I think the ending epilogue is relatively unnecesary, and takes away from the depth of the ...

I like the use of the song as a link throughout the whole story. I also enjoy the elements of mystery - how we don't quite all the way know ...

Hello, Okay, firstly, I love the idea behind this. However, it may work a little bit better if you don't have the revelation in a big letter form...maybe have her ...

Well, in the general nature vs. nurture debate, there's this interesting case... this boy was badly injured in a surgery during his birth. Basically, he had to be raised as ...