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Attolia - The Semitic race includes the Arabs, btw. And I think it's a bit extreme to claim Israel has freedom of amounts to look at the map. Israel is ...

Hey, I saw you on the Welcome Board, so I figured I'll reivew one of your stories. I enjoyed the set up and fairy tale feel of the story, although ...

Hey, it's great to meet you! Welcome to YWS. I'm definitely going to check out some of your stories...I love sci-fi and fantasy more than words can describe, trust me, ...

Haha, thanks. I've managed to get a total of two things posted...I've got a bit of a block (called school, bleh), so I'm probably going to be reviewing more than ...

Hey! It's good to see you, I just read one of your first submissions. Welcome! I'm short too, don't worry about it. What bands do you like/are you going to ...

Okay, as the person before me said, the first thing that caught my eye are the grammar and spelling errors. Although as far as writing goes, grammar and spelling isn't ...

Okay, firstly about titles...they're not that important, firstly, and secondly, it's just whatever theme you think runs through your novel the most, or just a concept or thought you want ...

This is the first of the Rom stories (chronologically the last). It is extremely dark, so I am warning you. (If you've read the Lovers, this is linked) The first ...

Okay, I'm not a photographer, but I know WAY too many ones, so I'll try to do my best oin this... I like the color scheme and the black and ...

As an Arab, I definitely have an opinion on these, and it amounts to look at the history. Palestine isn't illogically full of hate. They had land, and homes. They ...

Okay, I like the idea behind this. As for writing from a male POV, it's not too difficult - I mean, there are masculine women and feminine men. I find ...

Hallo. I like the description of the room, firstly. I like the set up and the revelation of what they're actually doing - I think it's quite clever, and it ...

The shortening is translates to Even in Arcadia, I exist. My favorite authors differ by the day, although I've always loved Oscar Wilde. I have a little Oscar Wilde action ...

I enjoyed this scene fragment. It would be lovely if you could give us some earlier background to the scene - we have no idea what the era is, or ...

I like the rhyme scheme, but it might serve the overall dark tone of your narrative better if you use alternating rhymes...the quickness of the rhymes makes it take on ...