eternallyconfused

Okay. I'm going to be honest. This was extremely hard to read at point. Ive only made it halfway through the second scene. But, i will go ahead and critique ...

It's a work in progress. It needs a lot of editing, but I'm having a bit of writers block as to how to fix it up. All reviews will help. ...

It was the best of time, and it was the worst of times. I had just fallen in love for the very first time; I was getting good grades; I ...

This is a great story. My main complaint is that it just ended. There should be more to it. have it last a little longer or something. Maybe several days ...

Game art and programming is a lot of fun. I write a lot of poetry. I also like to write romantic fiction (but always with a comedic twist). I love ...

Well hello there. I really have no idea how to introduce myself. So let's just wing this. I am eighteen years young. I am one of those people that never ...

This is a really great piece. I loved reading it and cannot wait to read more. There was one spelling error: They had met in collage and never drifted apart. ...