Random avatar

eternal

  • Art & Photography Re: photography!

    They are all really nice, and professional looking, which isn't something I say often. I also like how there is feeling and yet it looks beautiful at the same time. ...

    Apr 5, 2008
  • Art & Photography Re: New Photos by May

    Number 5 was great. I felt it was prettier and different than most flower shots.

    Apr 5, 2008
  • Art & Photography Re: Fairy Dust

    I don't mean to just cut out a category, but I really am tired of the photos that give that myspace, 'scene' angle-shot feel. It just seems old to me. ...

    Apr 5, 2008
  • Art & Photography Re: Bella's Block

    Actually, I disagree with previous users about cropping the pic. to get rid of the side things. I think that's what makes the picture, in fact, I'd like to see ...

    Apr 5, 2008
  • Art & Photography Re: Black and White

    Nice shots ; ) First off, I think you did a nice job, but I think you can find better subjects. Some off them, especially number 1, seemed like those ...

    Apr 5, 2008
  • Art & Photography Re: Pictures of Victoria

    Number 1 and 2 had very nice backgrounds, and I think that's where the remainder of the photographs really suffered. The subject of a picture is very important, of course, ...

    Apr 5, 2008
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: If Only (Updated!)

    Okay, I think you have a little bit of a tendency to want to tell the story rather than write it. What I mean by that is, you don't have ...

    Apr 5, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Waiting to Exhale

    Nice poem, I would suggest, however, to review your lines and break them more. They're a little too lengthy and don't flow properly.

    Apr 5, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Scrapbook

    I think it's a cute poem and has a decent subject, however I agree with the previous users that your rhythm is off, especially at the line "and stop saying ...

    Apr 5, 2008


I do not use my siblings as the cleaning equipment.
— Atticus