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  • Other Poetry Re: karma

    i think i am one of those who control their own luck, although lately i have been on a streak of bad luck that i begin to think i dont ...

    Oct 10, 2008
  • Other Poetry Re: Try This On For Size

    i sure could try some of those for size and they would fit.... 'try this on for size all the feelings that you have fill you up like crazy boiling ...

    Oct 10, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Don't You Get It?

    'so content, yet so wild. I'll get you to smile. I'll get you to. I promise you...' Hey October girl i loved your poem/song but the verse above is my ...

    Oct 8, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: count your blessings

    When the darkness falls, lights go on, doors are locked. Behind locked doors supper is served, warm beds await. life couldn't get any better. In the darkness-outside, in the alleys ...

    Oct 8, 2008
  • Fiction Discussion Re: Recommend your favorite book

    Hangman's Journal by Shashi Warrier, The Alchemist by Paulo Coelho, By The River Piedra I Sat Down And Wept by Paulo Coelho, Shiloh by Phylis Reynolds. I also read Gone ...

    Oct 2, 2008
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: Do you approve on interracial dating?

    interracial dating is ok the only problem comes when the two races let their different cultures, backgrounds and all other stuff like these come between them but if the two ...

    Oct 2, 2008
  • Narrative Poetry Re: The Name Is Carmen.

    I have to agree with Snoink above, when i saw the C-A-R-M-E-N i thought ... but it came across really good. I think the E-line was good as opposed to ...

    Oct 2, 2008
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: Is the word retard a "bad word"?

    The word 'retard' is often used to offensively describe a person who is stupid, dumb or simply slow but could possibly be more. It does not necessarily refer to the ...

    Oct 2, 2008
  • Other Poetry Re: Poem I wrote for my best mate

    Your poem is very sweet and endearing, although it lacks punctuation throughout. Apart from the punctuation, the poem seems really natural and that i think, is a good thing since ...

    Oct 2, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: inside

    thank you guys for your reviews and Chirantha I have tried to put the changes you suggested...

    Oct 2, 2008
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Short poem: Door to heaven

    hi i really like your style though there are parts of your poem i did not understand especially the beginning.

    Oct 2, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: inside

    INSIDE inside my mind- seems like everything I do turns out a mistake seems everyone I care about turns out a fake seems like life isn't what they say it ...

    Oct 2, 2008
  • Other Poetry Re: karma

    RIPPLES I woke up this morning before a friend came calling. She said,' a pebble in the water causes a ripple effect' and that,' every action has a consequence', I ...

    Oct 2, 2008


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