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Re: karma
i think i am one of those who control their own luck, although lately i have been on a streak of bad luck that i begin to think i dont ...
Oct 10, 2008 -
Re: Try This On For Size
i sure could try some of those for size and they would fit.... 'try this on for size all the feelings that you have fill you up like crazy boiling ...
Oct 10, 2008 -
Re: Don't You Get It?
'so content, yet so wild. I'll get you to smile. I'll get you to. I promise you...' Hey October girl i loved your poem/song but the verse above is my ...
Oct 8, 2008 -
Re: count your blessings
When the darkness falls, lights go on, doors are locked. Behind locked doors supper is served, warm beds await. life couldn't get any better. In the darkness-outside, in the alleys ...
Oct 8, 2008 -
Re: Recommend your favorite book
Hangman's Journal by Shashi Warrier, The Alchemist by Paulo Coelho, By The River Piedra I Sat Down And Wept by Paulo Coelho, Shiloh by Phylis Reynolds. I also read Gone ...
Oct 2, 2008 -
Re: Do you approve on interracial dating?
interracial dating is ok the only problem comes when the two races let their different cultures, backgrounds and all other stuff like these come between them but if the two ...
Oct 2, 2008 -
Re: The Name Is Carmen.
I have to agree with Snoink above, when i saw the C-A-R-M-E-N i thought ... but it came across really good. I think the E-line was good as opposed to ...
Oct 2, 2008 -
Re: Is the word retard a "bad word"?
The word 'retard' is often used to offensively describe a person who is stupid, dumb or simply slow but could possibly be more. It does not necessarily refer to the ...
Oct 2, 2008 -
Re: Poem I wrote for my best mate
Your poem is very sweet and endearing, although it lacks punctuation throughout. Apart from the punctuation, the poem seems really natural and that i think, is a good thing since ...
Oct 2, 2008 -
Re: inside
thank you guys for your reviews and Chirantha I have tried to put the changes you suggested...
Oct 2, 2008 -
Re: Short poem: Door to heaven
hi i really like your style though there are parts of your poem i did not understand especially the beginning.
Oct 2, 2008 -
Re: inside
INSIDE inside my mind- seems like everything I do turns out a mistake seems everyone I care about turns out a fake seems like life isn't what they say it ...
Oct 2, 2008 -
Re: karma
RIPPLES I woke up this morning before a friend came calling. She said,' a pebble in the water causes a ripple effect' and that,' every action has a consequence', I ...
Oct 2, 2008
