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A beautiful soul, loving and giving. For a friend,you'd give your all. Your curse is your beautiful soul, for our world is foul. love and give; care and forgive; The ...

The simple line 'I stand up' makes this simple and short poem stand out. It explains the rest of the lines and from my point of view is the key ...

Hi... You have a good flow and captivating words, I found myself reading your poem to the end... without understanding what you mean by the lioness being your guardian, the ...

This is beautiful!! I loved it from start to finish...some poems have a way of starting well and loosing their theme and storyline in the final stanza or lines. '....The ...

what a poem?! its so seems as if its been written with no effort at all!! i mean it flows so easily and all the verses make sense alone and ...

Walk past the mirror, And as I get nearer, I see a face you know well; At least soon you will tell. See it’s not the appearance, But my disappearance. ...

* Should I write a love poem Since it's Saint Valentine's day i think you need a question mark here Should I propose to dance or to sing Or can ...

I kissed my frog today, To my dismay He turned into a prince. I miss his croaking, I miss his wet slimy body, I miss his constant hopping. All I ...

See them, there, in that open expance. Hear them, there, in their rigid lines. They march with, i don't think you need a comma here precision, discipline, and a strange ...

hi lil_pau, As I started reading your poem i was quite taken by the way you painted the" orange autumn leaves and red maple leaves..." Masterpiece I'm lying under the ...

Thanks guys, your reviews are a great help!!

The forbidden fruit Ever so sweet, If only it were not such an impossible feat; My darling, you would be my only. Temptation, so hard to resist Why does it ...

The forbidden fruit Ever so sweet If only it were not such an impossible feat My love,you and only you I would love. Temptation, so hard to resist Why does ...

Thank you for the reviews everyone, they are all quite helpful and I am working on the poem so keep checking in for the edited version soon. Monument Soul I ...

Hi there I'm not very good at being a critic but here is my two pence.Your style of writing is great and fun to read. The words such as Push, ...