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Hey guys! I'm so glad you guys are checking chapter five of my story out. :) Please leave a comment or something below just so I can get a variety ...

Awwww. This chapter made me feel sad for Sophia. :( She needs to find a love interest, but knowing your writing she probably will find one. Philup is an interesting ...

Hey everyone! This is chapter four of my book, so please read the first three chapters to get caught up with the story. It really helps if you know what's ...

Huh. This could be interesting. Just try not to make it another Twilight. There are too many Twilight posers as it is. Keep it up and I'll definitely be checking ...

Hi romance otaku ! Its estead. You've been reviewing my stuff so i thought it would only be fair to read all of your stuff! :) So I'm not the ...

I resubmitted this first chapter again with the changes that I saw fit. Thanks for all the comments. It really helps me become a better writer! Keep them coming. :) ...

romance otaku Yeah i kind of was trying to make Tristan sound older and body builder type. You'll see why in later chapters! ;) I'll have to look over this ...

Chapter Three: The Lawn Mower Man “Have a safe walk home,” Ms. Cheng called to us as we walked back to our house. “She knows we live across the street ...

Another very good chapter. :) I'm terrible at grammar and such, so I'm not even going to bother trying to find something wrong with that. It seems as if Jabberhut ...

Hey! Your work is REALLY good. It does remind me of Twilight in parts, but those are just parts. The whole idea could go in a totally different direction, and ...

Chapter Two: Moving Into my Imaginary Hell Now we’re back to where we started. In my mom’s truck going towards my inevitable doom, Alva Oklahoma. “Guess what??” my mom said ...

Wow. You're so good! Lol. I only wish i could go so in depth with the whole kissing thing. I am a Twilight lover so other vampire stories i critique ...

Haha. Very funny idea. I quite liked it. You should really continue this. I could see it as some tween fiction novel of some sort. There were a few spelling ...

To the reviewers of my story Hey thank you guys for reviewing my work! I'm not sure if you'll get to read this somehow but this is just a few ...

Hey there! I just got done reading your story and here's what i think. I actually generally liked it. I've played with the idea of normality myself some times and ...