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Well, I would pick my age. You know, my father would probably have stayed at ten. His life was difficult only when he turned eleven. I guess I would've picked ...

Glasses.

Sam Welsh gasped as he was given the news. Was he really going to recite The Raven in front of everyone? He stammered. And he got nervous in front of ...

George obliged and pulled out his silver laptop, flipping it open. Minutes later he was on Young Writers Society and had already made an account. Someone named "Big Brother" had ...

Amateur.

You know you're a writer when you log onto Young Writers Society every. Single. Day.

I would say good-bye to my friends and family. I don't want to make them sad or anything, so yeah... -Bianca, The New Generation Oh no! You have a complicated ...

Uh, flick on all the switches?

"Ooh! A dragon! I would really like a bronze dragon, like my dad does! It breaths fire, too. Then I could ride around on it and do flips and acrobatic... ...

Some nights, I wonder about life.

Pretty nice sentence. 9/10. You intrigue the reader, making them want to know what's in the journal and whatnot. However, I think it's not a REAL attention grabber. It's not ...

Grains--Food, yo. You never know how long you'll be without food. Raft--Um, duh? Water--Essential. Signal flares--I need to be rescued somehow... Knife--I get scared sometimes and I can catch food ...

And... this is another episode of the Best American Dogs show! Our newest guest is... Celina! *Celina walks onstage* Interviewer: So, I heard you're unnaturally shy. Why is that? Celina: ...

Oh, really? You wanna bet that you're the coolest person ever? Oh, sure. Haha, I was named after a dragon! You wanna beat THAT? I'd like to see you try! ...

My eyes Hard as rock Limbs unmoving Chest Falling up and down Stone You hit Me And I Fall. But You can't crack Me.