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erilea

  • Writing Activities Re: Rate the first sentence above you

    7/10. It's pretty nice, and I like your wording, but there's something off about it. The part after the semicolon's kind of confusing. Days went by, and still Zaerith was ...

    Jan 15, 2016
  • Writing Activities Re: Speedwrite the word above you #3

    Video games? (I don't know what game development software is!)

    Jan 15, 2016
  • Archive Re: Not Another Birthday

    Artemis gasped. She was expecting Typhon, or maybe some other vicious monster that the gods themselves couldn't have defeated. Surely it would've taken the whole of YWS to do that. ...

    Jan 15, 2016
  • Archive Re: YWS Goes on Holiday

    Artemis jumped over the gate, ignoring the few security guards who were blocking it, and sped for @Rydia. They were heading away from her, moving quickly to catch their flight. ...

    Nov 26, 2015
  • Archive Re: Not Another Birthday

    Artemis decided to take a look at the forums to see how they were doing. When she burst through the double-oak doors, she saw @TheScratchedAcoustic and @CuriosityCat fighting a wave ...

    Nov 25, 2015
  • Archive Re: Not Another Birthday

    Artemis28 watched the battle, patiently waiting for a chance to strike. Out of the corner of her eye, she saw @Hattable throwing a chair at a metal robot. "He celebrated ...

    Nov 24, 2015
  • Writing Activities Re: Story in Six Words

    Silver spoons as deadly, powerful catapults.

    Nov 23, 2015
  • Writing Activities Re: Make Up The Worst Possible Opening Line Ever

    Hello! My name is _____ and this is my story.

    Nov 23, 2015
  • Writing Activities Re: Speedwrite the word above you #3

    Ship.

    Nov 23, 2015
  • Welcome Mat Re: Introducing me

    Hey, welcome! I'm Artemis28, I'm still pretty young, but I've been on here for more than a year. Feel free to ask me some questions if you wanna, but I ...

    Nov 20, 2015
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hello

    Hello, Cody! You need any reviews, give me a call! :) XOX, Artemis28

    Nov 20, 2015
  • Writing Activities Re: Cool exercise.

    I guess I"ll be the first one to reply! I don't have many minor characters in my story. But if I had to choose I would say Cameria, daughter of ...

    Nov 17, 2015
  • Writing Activities Re: Another writing game

    "Oh, don't worry about that, dear!" The woman laughed nervously and swung the bag casually. Laura took a step back, suspicious. Why wouldn't this woman give her an answer?

    Nov 15, 2015
  • Writing Activities Re: Character Slumber party

    Should we post the answers on here?

    Nov 15, 2015
  • Writing Activities Re: You know you're a writer when...

    You know you're a writer when you spend hours thinking of an idea.

    Nov 15, 2015


That, sir, is the most frightening battlefield in the world: the blank page.
— Larry McMurtry, Comanche Moon