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  • Short Story » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Foxglove

    This is a great start to your story! I really like the metaphors in the beginning: it got me hooked right away. However, you might want to add more detail ...

    Sep 26, 2014


What really knocks me out is a book that, when you're all done reading it, you wish the author that wrote it was a terrific friend of yours and you could call him up on the phone whenever you felt like it. That doesn't happen much, though.
— J.D. Salinger, The Catcher in the Rye