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Re: Untitled as of yet....
Yes, I agree, I should probably work more on imagery and sounds. I love Derek Walcott for that reason; his poems are amongst the most vivid I've read. Anyone read ...
Sun Aug 14, 2005 12:00 pm -
Re: my sushi blueboy
I didn't like it. The smooth-flowing sentences lulled me to sleep, so I have no idea what I read. You need sonorization (creation of noise in silence), you need to ...
Fri Aug 12, 2005 8:02 pm
