emotionally(un)stable

Cascading reams of oceanic foam, The first sentence really grabs attention and was the perfect way to start. The words you use really create good imagery. Supports the greatest of ...

I think I get what you're trying to say here,T the girl with everything continues to get everything and some girls waste their lives trying to be that girl. I'm ...

It really flows well but it's a bit to forward, maybe make people have to think about what it's about it. Maybe add more about stolen innocence and more metaphors, ...