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Hello! I really liked this poem. The rhyming and flow were very nice. It was sad but emotion is what makes for a good poem, no? A few very small ...

Delilah: "No!" I screamed at the healers, "No! I WILL be with him! Let me in!" I struggled to get into the room, careful not to touch anyone. "Enough," hissed ...

Rio frowned. Confused by her new emotion and by Dana. "Don't you know how to swim?" She asked. "No. I never knew how to swim. My father always tried to ...

Hello Kiddo! This poem is another good one. I like how its straight foreward without many metaphors. As much as I love metaphors sometimes a break is needed. Time for ...

Delilah: Fenezari woke me up saying father had escaped and we were to go find him. We walked for a while and my stomach was sick. I was nervous about ...

Adaline: Natalia got medicine for Eris and I gave it to him. His fever remained and he vomited. I patted his back with one hand. "Are you going to throw ...

Aiight kiddo, here goes it. Over all I liked the rhythm, it was smooth and even and it read well. It was a good poem in general. This brings me ...

Rio eyed the man. "My name is Dana, just a lonely man from another country. I've seen Watermen in my birth country, but seeing a Watermaiden like you has truly ...

Slow down for a bit k? just wait for a little while before posting. Slllooowwww ;)

Rio wasn't particularly insulted when Querp suggested she was a "heavy load" so she agreed to watch his donkey. It confused her why he had to leave so suddenly. She ...

The little imp seemed to be arguie with himself for a while, but decided to help her. He ran off to get a donkey and a cart. Rio sat on ...

Adaline: "Mostly my stomach. I can't understand why." I put some more cool water on his face. "I don't feel so good, Adaline. I think I'm sick. I can barely ...

Adaline: The girl said she was Arwen. Then began to talk about the cirque. I didn;t hear her...something was wrong. I went inside to the boys. Eris was on the ...

Adaline: Natalia came out to talk but I was a bit too flustered to hear anything. I clenched my body and looked at her. Suddenly a sneeze came out of ...

Smile at the monsters, dear. Offer them some tea. Ask them if they will come out to play a game with thee. Smile at the monsters, dear. do not scream ...