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wow...that was a beautiful poem! :)

good job! and this is your first shot at poetry??? Faboulous!!!!!!!!!!!!! Keep writing !!!!!!

That was an amazing poem. please write more. ♥ emoticon220

ollie, that was beautiful! i almost cried, no joke! there were some parts tht could have been reworded heres some feedback (you dont really have 2 listen 2 me if ...

Think of this... If your life was a flower, would it bloom? Would it rise and fall with the seasons? Or, possibly would it wilt with the bearing load of ...