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NOw there were two other girls on the bus. Clarissa Lions and Raven Rose. It scared me to think of talking to them but somehow I did. "So...You guys have ...

Alright, I've tried this before and it sucked I'm trying again after reading the rules and hopefully it will be better. Story line: You are a teen/young adult (12-17, since ...

Name: Kadel Gender: passing herself off as a boy, actually a girl Age: 14 Post:crows nest Appearence: Her short hair covers her face past her nose and is longer slightly ...

She was 16 when she started The Walk. With a guitar on her back and $275 jammed in the part of her beat up vans, where the sole and the ...

@: Meggs! they are charecters i made up for my story. @: Peanut! thank youz!

I do not understand why people shun the people who are not like them. I never will. Personally, people are people, we are made how we are and no one ...

Really nice. I love your perspective and the metaphores you make. Few things to look at: they become a part of you. Then they just rip away and leave. Life ...

wonderful! the only thing i have to say is add some periods to make it flow better. i didnt know where one sentence bagan and the other ended. other than ...

Reggie stared out at the rain. it had been two months already, two months since she defeated the first vour, two months since she had saved her brother, two months ...

good job! i appreciate your use of punctuation. i like how you expressed the feelings of different people everywhere. (i am also weird :) )the only thing i have to ...

real nice silent real nice. ;) haha tee hee (other cake)

GreaT! i loved the AABBAA format and the flow was even and...Flowy! Many would say it should be longer but Personally i prefer shorter poems. the only thing i have ...

Awww. doll. of course it is but its not about you.

Actually thats really good! i liked it a lot one little thing Less we stand and chant Lest not less. thats it...although i leave your poem to the grammer sharks ...

Beautiful Poem! it really shows the writers emotions and what they want but cant have all together very nice. on little thing though One step past te the thats it ...