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Hello. First off,I Really like this poem. The emotion is clearly conveyed but at the same time lets the readers mind wander to their own feelings. Nitpicks: 1. Punctuation! You ...

I Like this story. As sad as it is, it shows how easy it is to look from a different perspective and see how out culture differs from others. Even ...

Hello!I'm not exactly sure how to review a review but i'll try. I've never seen this movie so I like that you described in detail without giving too much away. ...

Hello, I'm Moti. I liked this, you did an excelent job conveying emotion and thought without direct thoughts from the father. Nitpicks: 1. Words like zenith and occidental, I don't ...

Hey,I'm Moti,i'll be your reviewer today.Over all I liked it. Discussions are something I don't see a lot on here and I admire your individuality. Nit Picks: 1. Mr.Friere says ...

Adaline: Everyone blushed at Natalia's note. The boy said slowly and awkwardly,"I may be single, but I'm not her boyfriend." We heard an angry voice yell to the serious twin. ...

Adaline: The serious one ratted out his brother pretty quickly, "That would be my twin brother, Eris. He's the mastermind behind your predicament." "Killjoy!" hissed Eris. "Jerk" Said the other ...

Adaline: The girl nodded. I grabbed a brush and began on her hair. "So, Are you good at silks?"I asked, trying to make conversation. The girls mouth opened and closed. ...

I don't have one...why would i want to know what people are doing every 5 one cares that you ate a bagel!

Adaline: Pacil, the man who dragged me in came back into the smaller tent. This time he had another girl. A skinny blonde who looked scared and shy. Pacil, looking ...

Adaline: My feet burned. Last night I practiced for hours after the others had gone to bed. La Maison de Ballet was dark and quiet. Mother came down the metal ...

Name: (Both names. Or you shall be keeled.) Delilah Redkei Gender: (Uh, duh?) Female Age: (Age range is from 16-34) 19 Appearance: Delilah has pixie cut hair that is black ...

Thanks for being the first to post in my WRFF! The poem was lovely and opinionated. It really shows your view on the world and I like it. A few ...

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I kinda wrote this off the cuff, so im not sure how it will be, i just want a quick opinion. thanks :D