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Fire Burning (Sean Kingston) (I'm Going to be an Arsonist?) What will be your future job?

Adaline: Max excused us from the dressing room. "Eris told me he didn't do anything to Natalia. Said he took an oath that he wouldn't prank you or Natalia ever ...

1. What Should be the name of the city Kickassy (Alias, Kirk McClancy) lives in? 2. What should be some of "Kirk"s powers? 3. What should his worst enemies do? ...

Soap on a rope. Held by the Pope. The Pope is a dope, Because he likes to mope over his soap... on a rope, and rejection by Hope. (This poem ...

Hun used as a term of endearment ammong friends, not anything else at this point,

Adaline: Natalia didn't understand the chalk, I could see it on her face. Max and eris excused themselves to talk and I took the opportunity to explain the chalk. "Chalk. ...

Adaline: Harmonia applauded my act. It made me feel good to know that I had done well. Then he asked if I wanted to hear a secret. In my ear ...

Hello! I love lyrics and I am happy to review them. This is a neeat song. Very straight forward and clean. Not clogged with metaphors. I like that. Nitpicks: 1. ...

Hello! I'm Moti, I'll be your reviewer today. First things first, I like it. Very emotional and it tells the whole story but is still short and sweet and to ...

Adaline: Harmonia went off to do something else where in the tent and Eris and Natalia were talking. I took this oportunity to try on costumes. In the dressing room ...

Hey can you guys like...slow down for a bit so i can get caught up? i havn't been able to get on and i missed an entire page...

Hello! I like this poem. It's simple and straight forward. Nitpicks: 1. Punctuation! Add some punctuation to add to the flow of the poem. 2. I have to agree with ...

I completely disagree with Tgirly. I understand what you're saying. The peach is singular, lonely and has what it needs already given to it. The pear has to work to ...

Hey-o. I like this poem, it shows how deep feelings go and how they effect us. Nitpicks: 1. You have no capitols. A capitol letter should go at the beginning ...