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I don't usually like these kinda things, but this was kinda funny! (That may have had something to do with the fact that you had a Hobbit for an avatar. ...

If you're talking about just graphic sex scenes, I totally agree... for young fiction books anyway. If the sex is, um, not so graphic, I'd be a hypocrite if I ...

Oh. My. God. I went to read this feeling all, um, 'critiquey', and ended up collapsing over the computer screen clutching my sides (ie: pissing myself laughing.) This was great! ...

I had a few problems with this: Is this what death feels like? Kerenza had thought it happier, or more carefree. But she knew she wasn’t dead. So, does she ...

Short review: Beautiful imagery, but I didn't really like this bit: Just Bring me to my home, Oh someone, bring me home. Not sure how you could improve it, just ...

I'm not a poet, so I won't comment on your writing style/topic. But it was definitely effective (I need a new word, 'effective' starts sounding bland when you use it ...

My first reaction was "Neeegaaarrrrgh!" I know that doesn't make any sense-it's the sound I make when emerging from a absorbing yet shocking story. "Neeegaaarrrrgh!" is probably the best compliment ...

I think 'An Awkward Moment' wasn't the right name for that piece. I liked the idea of conquering the whole world and then going, "WTF do I do now?" but ...

No disrespect of any kind meant by any of this. I was meaning to publish the whole story, but quite a few people have asked me when I'm going to ...

I read about three replies to this before my ribs (and my brain) started hurting. I love you crazy Americans and how you hate everybody :) The most annoying thing ...

Wowwwwwwwwwwwwwww. This was... good. Reallyreally good. (I need to work on my description....) Anyhoo, the first few sentences seemed more tell-y than show-y. And I don't think he'd have stuff ...

I'm trying to tell you how much I loved this without using the words 'loved', 'really liked', 'brilliant' or amazing'. And failing miserably, but you get my point. Anyhow. It's ...

Overall, I liked it. Really good idea and written well. And it was interesting (the good interesting :))Here's some things I think you could improve on: It was lying on ...

Moonlight glimmers off the polished white marble, bright enough to create faint shadows across the temple floor. Gold figures gaze across the room from their niches in great marble columns. ...

Trying to take something amazing you've planned out in your head and translating it to paper. Not because it's hard to describe, but because my short-term memory sucks balls. Even ...