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My teacher recommended I join an online writing site, since I was always writing but so shy about letting people see my work. I went home and Googled 'young writers', ...

Hahahahahahahahahaha... That is all.

Okay. Because you kissed my ass so nicely, I'll review this. :) But it's going to be tough love. Also, I'm going to assume you gave me permission to rip ...

I'm a terrible editor. This has been gathering dust for three months and I'm still not sure what to do with it. All yours, yws. deep in the dark she ...

Damnit. I thought if this was terrible I'd have an excuse to keep being lazy. No more excuses... (P.S. Who decided villanelles are male, anyway? Or that they, you know, ...

You seemed to have skipped developing a realistic story and strong characters, and gone straight to preaching to us instead. It's obvious the whole purpose of this story was to ...

This was short and sweet and uncomplicated-I loved it. I wasn't sure what era it was set in-sometime in the first half of the last century? But that doesn't matter ...

Oh, wow. Um. A mixture. Usually I just randomly find books, like if I'm in a bookstore or the library and I happen to pick one up, I'll have a ...

(I said 'Emmanuel Sand, who could he be?' out loud and my mum just invented a plot for me. So, this is a joint effort from me and my mummy, ...

Haha. I thought this was a really crappy story until I realised it was satire. I'd never heard of those terms before, (luckily TvTropes never disappoints) but still found this ...

I'm not surprised that 'Novel' is winning-it was my vote too-even though I've been writing a lot of short stories lately.

This was a good start to a story-I haven't looked at Chapters Two and One yet. I liked the descriptions of the land and the people, and the way the ...

You say I live inside An icy shell That you’re sick of trying to crack. You say I push people away Because I don’t want to seem Human. You say ...

The acid of your treacherous thoughts drips down your spine soaks into your stomach churns your last meal sends it surging up your throat. Solidifies into iron bands around your ...

(Sorry if this review sounds like I'm telling you what to write... That's just how I review, I think about how I would write the story and go from there. ...