emmylove

At the very beginning, you say that Salvador licks Finn's face, but since I didn't know Salvador was a dog, it creeped me out. I know that you showed (not ...

Because your title is spelled wrong, I will just fix all of the errors. Sorry, but I have good spelling, and bad spelling annoys me. Assassin Prologue The mysterious figures ...

So, um. I won't get into the nitty gritty of grammar and spelling, seeing as some of the others have already covered that. I'll help suggest some other things. Here's ...