emmylove

I know there are already tons of reviews on this, but I hope you read this. I have a few things to say. 1.) I absolutely cannot put into words ...

Hey, there! Emmylove, here to review! First off, is that a working title? I don't know if you've ever read the fanfiction "My Immortal," but it's considered by the Internet ...

I would like a PM :) Fat Boy's finger fetish amuses me. I'm not a huge fan of all the "so, anyway, et cetera." But, I mean, it's supposed to ...

HAHAHAHAHA!!!! I like the content enough to almost not comment on how the syllables don't actually work with the song. But look what I've done. The syllables don't actually work ...

GRAAAAARRRRRRR!!! Your first chapter is so much better than my first chapter! I was going to nitpick, but somebody else already covered it. Lately, I haven't been writing anything or ...

Hello :) I have a few nitpicks and then I'll comment on content and whatnot. A rapist is a vicious specie, who allowed himself to invade helpless girls and boys. ...

Hey there :) I'm Christian as well, and I can really relate. A lot of people are just like, "So, you're Christian? You hate abortion and gays? You're a right-winged ...

Hello :) I'm going to nitpick about grammar and spelling, if you don't mind, then comment on everything else after. Liliana- chapter 1 It doesn’t matter how hard I think ...

Hey there :) I don't know anything about this "Writer's Roulette" contest, so whatever. I'd just like to say that I don't like the dialogue-only format. I think it might ...

Don't tell me what to do :( Anyway, I've repressed the urge to click on this for a few days. Seeing as I'm... human... I sort of gave in to ...

Hello, Fearless :) I'm here to review. I'm not generally a fan of prologues, but this is well-written and it makes me want to read more, so kudos. I guess ...

Hey there, Doxie! I'm here to review :) First off, this whole story sounds a lot like a blog entry, especially because of the parenthases. You really shouldn't have those ...

I finally got around to reviewing! I'm not going to nitpick, though, because all my nitpicks had to do with word choice, things like "You could use a better word ...

Hey Purple! :) I'm only reviewing this because I feel strongly about the subject. Otherwise, I am currently working on a persuasive essay and probably shouldn't be on the Interwebs ...

Since no one else wanted to be nitpicky, I'll do it :P "You can't prove it doesn't exist!" T(lowercase) he nerdy boy insisted, pouting and crossing his arms. (Do you ...